Comments for Pizzat Has Fics! No, seriously! http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com PizzaLORD(better known as Pizzat)'s Fics. Sun, 03 Aug 2008 11:23:30 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Chapter 1 [The World ; The Moon // Your Heart] by pizzat http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/2008/08/02/chapter-1-the-world-the-moon-your-heart/#comment-100 pizzat Sun, 03 Aug 2008 11:23:30 +0000 http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/?p=25#comment-100 it's not writing about relationships that kills, it's just how "For me, to fulfil his every whim and fancy was no chore. My reward was nothing less than his satisfaction." was frickin cheesy. *coughs up blood* *dies* it’s not writing about relationships that kills, it’s just how

“For me, to fulfil his every whim and fancy was no chore. My reward was nothing less than his satisfaction.”

was frickin cheesy.

*coughs up blood*

*dies*

]]> Comment on Chapter 1 [The World ; The Moon // Your Heart] by luminodrake http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/2008/08/02/chapter-1-the-world-the-moon-your-heart/#comment-99 luminodrake Sun, 03 Aug 2008 05:44:48 +0000 http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/?p=25#comment-99 OH NOES WILL THERE BE A COMMIE NORTH CHINA AND DEMOCRATIC SOUTH CHINA??????////slashslash *cough* No really, this chapter is pretty okay! But with your intestines choking from the inside when writing about relationships, you probably should get a girlfriend or something. (Hi kettle, I'm pot! Nice to meet you. ...black.) lawl, I kid. OH NOES WILL THERE BE A COMMIE NORTH CHINA AND DEMOCRATIC SOUTH CHINA??????////slashslash
*cough*

No really, this chapter is pretty okay!

But with your intestines choking from the inside when writing about relationships, you probably should get a girlfriend or something.

(Hi kettle, I’m pot! Nice to meet you.

…black.)

lawl, I kid.

]]> Comment on Chapter 1 [The World ; The Moon // Your Heart] by pizzat http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/2008/08/02/chapter-1-the-world-the-moon-your-heart/#comment-98 pizzat Sat, 02 Aug 2008 10:55:41 +0000 http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/?p=25#comment-98 haha, full metal panic anyone? when i wrote lia's lines, my intestines were trying to choke my lungs from the inside and stop my heart from beating any longer. FORGIVE ME FOR WRITING SUCH A HORRID CHAPTER. but as mooty said, i guess it's just a draft. :( i will put in random geopolitical stuff in, but it'll be in bits of pieces (much like ki's personality) look forward to it? >_> haha, full metal panic anyone?

when i wrote lia’s lines, my intestines were trying to choke my lungs from the inside and stop my heart from beating any longer.

FORGIVE ME FOR WRITING SUCH A HORRID CHAPTER.

but as mooty said, i guess it’s just a draft. :(

i will put in random geopolitical stuff in, but it’ll be in bits of pieces (much like ki’s personality)

look forward to it? >_>

]]> Comment on Chapter 0: Prologue [The World ; The Moon // Your Heart] by luminodrake http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/2008/07/18/chapter-0-prologue-the-world-the-moon/#comment-97 luminodrake Sat, 02 Aug 2008 10:22:47 +0000 http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/?p=22#comment-97 Looking at the last line again, it shows that you're biased to the Northern hemisphere being at the top. Maybe you should go acquire one of those fancy Australian world maps. :3 Looking at the last line again, it shows that you’re biased to the Northern hemisphere being at the top. Maybe you should go acquire one of those fancy Australian world maps. :3

]]> Comment on Chapter 1 [The World ; The Moon // Your Heart] by luminodrake http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/2008/08/02/chapter-1-the-world-the-moon-your-heart/#comment-96 luminodrake Sat, 02 Aug 2008 10:15:44 +0000 http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/?p=25#comment-96 3 POVs in the same chapter! Whoo. And uh, no, I couldn't guess it from the prologue. Going ahead with the romance is surefine, but you'd better develop the geopolitical aspect too. (Watching too many giant robot shows cultivated a taste for useless details not really related to the main plot.) 3 POVs in the same chapter! Whoo.

And uh, no, I couldn’t guess it from the prologue. Going ahead with the romance is surefine, but you’d better develop the geopolitical aspect too. (Watching too many giant robot shows cultivated a taste for useless details not really related to the main plot.)

]]> Comment on Chapter 0: Prologue [The World ; The Moon // Your Heart] by luminodrake http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/2008/07/18/chapter-0-prologue-the-world-the-moon/#comment-95 luminodrake Fri, 18 Jul 2008 14:10:29 +0000 http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/?p=22#comment-95 キタ－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－（゜∀゜）－－－－－－－－－－－－－－！！！ キタ－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－（゜∀゜）－－－－－－－－－－－－－－！！！

]]> Comment on Chapter 0: Prologue [The World ; The Moon // Your Heart] by mooty http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/2008/07/18/chapter-0-prologue-the-world-the-moon/#comment-94 mooty Fri, 18 Jul 2008 09:57:45 +0000 http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/?p=22#comment-94 woot! the dawn of a new fic! now let's just hope progress keeps up =/ woot! the dawn of a new fic! now let’s just hope progress keeps up =/

]]> Comment on Blue by luminodrake http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/2007/12/27/blue/#comment-92 luminodrake Sun, 23 Mar 2008 07:04:44 +0000 http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/2007/12/27/blue/#comment-92 Wait, word limit? ...Ohhhhhhhhhhh. In that case I should be posting up something else pretty soon, once I've stopped slacking. Wait, word limit?

…Ohhhhhhhhhhh.

In that case I should be posting up something else pretty soon, once I’ve stopped slacking.

]]> Comment on Blue by mooty http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/2007/12/27/blue/#comment-90 mooty Wed, 05 Mar 2008 12:19:36 +0000 http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com/2007/12/27/blue/#comment-90 powerful twist at the end. you could have expanded the concept of 'blue' and Myra's melancholy a little bit more, but you were working under a word limit anyway. powerful twist at the end. you could have expanded the concept of ‘blue’ and Myra’s melancholy a little bit more, but you were working under a word limit anyway.

]]> Comment on About by gwei http://pizzatfics.wordpress.com#comment-89 gwei Fri, 25 Jan 2008 14:33:58 +0000 #comment-89 *POKEPOKE* why are your fics mostly about POKEmon? *POKEPOKE* why are your fics mostly about POKEmon?

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